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So my first post-summer track is sort of done. Id like to know if the levels are in check, bass, high low etc etc and if the overal track is nice to the ears.

thanks a bunch:)

https://soundcloud.com/alume-music/tsi-ta-nsuma/s-hC0VT

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Alume wrote:So my first post-summer track is sort of done. Id like to know if the levels are in check, bass, high low etc etc and if the overal track is nice to the ears.

thanks a bunch:)

https://soundcloud.com/alume-music/tsi-ta-nsuma/s-hC0VT

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mainst09 wrote:
Alume wrote:So my first post-summer track is sort of done. Id like to know if the levels are in check, bass, high low etc etc and if the overal track is nice to the ears.

thanks a bunch:)

https://soundcloud.com/alume-music/tsi-ta-nsuma/s-hC0VT

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This one's really nice! One of the best tracks I've heard over here actually.

No comment about technical issues, everything sounded fine to me but I don't have professional ears.
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Really really nice Alume ,
Draws my mind to water and Japanese temples for some reason,if i were to nitpick id say i wasnt so mad on the winding up and down type sound that starts at 3.09 up to 5.10 or so i felt the rest of the sounds used in the track gelled better without it.
Hope its useful.

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Alume wrote:
mainst09 wrote:
Alume wrote:So my first post-summer track is sort of done. Id like to know if the levels are in check, bass, high low etc etc and if the overal track is nice to the ears.

thanks a bunch:)

https://soundcloud.com/alume-music/tsi-ta-nsuma/s-hC0VT

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what?
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mainst09 wrote:what?
I forgot what I was thinking at that moment man.. Its been like a day:(

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Alume wrote:
mainst09 wrote:what?
I forgot what I was thinking at that moment man.. Its been like a day:(

ugh :cry:
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Man, I'm really impressed.

It's an actual piece of music.

When the bass came back in after the break, it sounded a little bit out of place, especially the last 2 notes of the phrase. They sounded a bit too subby, like they should be in a dub reggae track, or simply too high in the mix.

Hats off to you man.

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Exactly the same thoughts as Jordan. Excellent work.

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Thanks Planaer and Jordannekke, I always value your input a lot:)


Some goes for you Mattie and Barfunkel.

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Post by mr.chielos »

Wow, really nice and hypnotic.
I have only checked it on my headphones and it sounds ok to me!

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No worries Alume, i always enjoy listening :)

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:)


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