technoooooooo
technoooooooo
Hey guys,
Thanks for giving it a listen, let me know what needs some work
https://soundcloud.com/alume-music/hello/s-8XKDt
Thanks for giving it a listen, let me know what needs some work
https://soundcloud.com/alume-music/hello/s-8XKDt
Re: technoooooooo
Wicked stuff... loving those textures
I think the arpy stuff can be more in the foreground in the second half, i thought it was building, but it just stays quiet...
I think the arpy stuff can be more in the foreground in the second half, i thought it was building, but it just stays quiet...
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I also thought the modulated water in cave like sound could be more in background in second half.Liked from16 seconds to 30 sec(or up to 1 min) possibly use this section again just before you introduce the arp fully at around 3.24.
Hope this generates a few useful thoughts
Hope this generates a few useful thoughts
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Re: technoooooooo
This is kinda hypnotic after a while. Really tasty. It also sounds really warm and rounded. But perhaps, in doing so you have buffed out all the transients. Are you cooking the compressors all over the shop? Maybe maybe not, Its cool like . If you have then think about opening them out a bit. If not the maybe just get a bit of a 1/16 open hat thing. Doesn't need to be loud just to add some spikes to the texture.
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Thanks for the feedback guys, Im really having trouble with this one. I think ill start from sctratch with the sound I really REALLY like and go from there.
Re: technoooooooo
Nice texture. Maybe up a little the level of the kick ?
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Wow lol, awesome is the word that comes to mind. Crappy headphones, so can't say much about the mix itself, but the whole tension that is building! Nice work
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Re: technoooooooo
Lovely stuff man!
Evolves nicely..
Evolves nicely..
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Really nice and hypnotic! With slightly better production I'd buy it on vinyl.
Nothing really I can pinpoint in the production though, it's just slightly flat sounding, with a bit edgier production it'd be a great, release-worthy track.
Nothing really I can pinpoint in the production though, it's just slightly flat sounding, with a bit edgier production it'd be a great, release-worthy track.
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I'm new to subsekt, have been lurking for ages, this is my first post, so hello.
I think the track is pretty damn good and has a lot of what I feel is missing in my own productions. Really nice evolving but gentle textures, and everything including the weight of kick/bass sounds just right on my K&H's and good headphones. I'd say stylewise somewhere in the ballpark of Luigi Tozzi / Fabrizio Lapiani?
The only "problem" I hear is that there's something missing, like a central theme. As it is now, the track has a body but no face, if that makes sense. The "fm arpish thingy" that comes in stays very quiet and subtle, as has been pointed out already. Think it would be a shame to stop working on this track, there's still so much space that you can use to make it an "official sounding" track. For example some kind of percussive element, something with stronger transients (as a driving rhythmic force), since right now the only real percussive element is the kick.
I think the track is pretty damn good and has a lot of what I feel is missing in my own productions. Really nice evolving but gentle textures, and everything including the weight of kick/bass sounds just right on my K&H's and good headphones. I'd say stylewise somewhere in the ballpark of Luigi Tozzi / Fabrizio Lapiani?
The only "problem" I hear is that there's something missing, like a central theme. As it is now, the track has a body but no face, if that makes sense. The "fm arpish thingy" that comes in stays very quiet and subtle, as has been pointed out already. Think it would be a shame to stop working on this track, there's still so much space that you can use to make it an "official sounding" track. For example some kind of percussive element, something with stronger transients (as a driving rhythmic force), since right now the only real percussive element is the kick.