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PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2018 4:10 am 
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Hi just wondering whether this has legs.
Feel like it misses something but don't know if i need to add or simply remodel whats already there.



I love the start of this song! So cool.

I agree that your kick needs to lose that laser top/mid it really doesn't fit.

The clicks fit just right to make the track roll, i also love the way you distorted those synths.

The bells are sounding so ominous, a really good part of the track.

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Oh man i have been trying to come up with something decent for so long.

So much tweaking... Trying to fix tracks to make them better.. What a fuck around.

Have listen to this, its all acid baby. I need to know if i'm on the right track with my sounds and i need to know if my mix is alright.

https://soundcloud.com/suppressormusic/inhale-the-microparticles-1/s-PDjz9

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Oh man i have been trying to come up with something decent for so long.

So much tweaking... Trying to fix tracks to make them better.. What a fuck around.

Have listen to this, its all acid baby. I need to know if i'm on the right track with my sounds and i need to know if my mix is alright.

https://soundcloud.com/suppressormusic/inhale-the-microparticles-1/s-PDjz9


Lovely man, great sound! Not your best work but its nice.
Kick sounds great on its own but as soon as you add that synth bass it masks kick a little bit too much, not sure though my ears are tired..
Everything else seems ok to me,
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Oh man i have been trying to come up with something decent for so long.

So much tweaking... Trying to fix tracks to make them better.. What a fuck around.

Have listen to this, its all acid baby. I need to know if i'm on the right track with my sounds and i need to know if my mix is alright.

https://soundcloud.com/suppressormusic/inhale-the-microparticles-1/s-PDjz9


Production wise I have no comments, it all sounds good to me, except maybe the kick could be just a little bit more prominent.
But the acid thing that comes in at around 1:00 combined with this fast tempo just gives the whole track a super strong psy/goa trance vibe. Maybe that was your goal with this track?


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Oh man i have been trying to come up with something decent for so long.

So much tweaking... Trying to fix tracks to make them better.. What a fuck around.

Have listen to this, its all acid baby. I need to know if i'm on the right track with my sounds and i need to know if my mix is alright.

https://soundcloud.com/suppressormusic/inhale-the-microparticles-1/s-PDjz9


Lovely man, great sound! Not your best work but its nice.
Kick sounds great on its own but as soon as you add that synth bass it masks kick a little bit too much, not sure though my ears are tired..
Everything else seems ok to me,
well done!


Cheers!

Yeah i'm reluctant to tweak it more as i have spent so long getting it to this point haha.
I really want to make it something decent so im gonna do some more sound design, percussion work.

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Production wise I have no comments, it all sounds good to me, except maybe the kick could be just a little bit more prominent.
But the acid thing that comes in at around 1:00 combined with this fast tempo just gives the whole track a super strong psy/goa trance vibe. Maybe that was your goal with this track?


Im glad that production is sounding decent.
Yeah maybe i have been getting a little too influenced from the big techno/psy doof i just got back from...

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suppressor wrote:
Oh man i have been trying to come up with something decent for so long.

So much tweaking... Trying to fix tracks to make them better.. What a fuck around.

Have listen to this, its all acid baby. I need to know if i'm on the right track with my sounds and i need to know if my mix is alright.

https://soundcloud.com/suppressormusic/inhale-the-microparticles-1/s-PDjz9



I think your mix is more than fine.
If anything, I would have liked a little more dirt in there at times, but that is of course my own opinion.
It's a bit too polished now.

Ow, and I think you're somehow putting too much "accent" on the 1st beat of your bar. (not sure how to say this, the note where your 1st kick of each bar plays)
Like, not saying this is done by your kick, but there are several elements that have their accent on exactly that 1st beat,
and I feel it gets too much after a while.
If that makes any sense at all.

Even that synth bass is on your 1st beat... try and move it to the 2nd beat and see how that might improve the groove when it plays together with the 303 riff.

And that build up... at 1:56 I would have actually left it almost completely quiet for like 2 or 3 seconds instead of immediately moving on with that very short sweep
(which you repeat at 2:40)

You've spent a lot of time on this, that's obvious because it shows,
but maybe acid doesn't need that much work either.
I mean, maybe it should have been more fun than it might have been now. :)
I remember I once did an acid track years ago. It was fucking crazy hot so I did the whole track in only 2 hours because it was too hot to stay in here longer anyway.
I'd post it but it's too embarrassing now mix wise (it's way down my SC page). Anyway, it's not worth much, but it did teach me acid should be pure fun. :)

anyway, nice work. ;)

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Sounds like a nice catchy tune :), especially like the part after the break :).

kicks could be more prominent in my opinion, but i'm listening on my laptop speakers, so that might be the problem as well...

nice work! :)

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suppressor wrote:
Oh man i have been trying to come up with something decent for so long.

So much tweaking... Trying to fix tracks to make them better.. What a fuck around.

Have listen to this, its all acid baby. I need to know if i'm on the right track with my sounds and i need to know if my mix is alright.

https://soundcloud.com/suppressormusic/inhale-the-microparticles-1/s-PDjz9



Some nice sounding acid, kick could use more oomph I think, you can notice that after the first break.

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Hello guys, so started to make this beat, and i'm looking for some advice. What I'm thinking that, it's sounds good on headphones, but it's sounds muddy on a speakers on a different places in a room, it's seems that all that groove is gone as soon as i move to the corner or something, anyway what do you think, should i carry on?
https://soundcloud.com/solomana/punch/s-d98YE

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juodas wrote:
Hello guys, so started to make this beat, and i'm looking for some advice. What I'm thinking that, it's sounds good on headphones, but it's sounds muddy on a speakers on a different places in a room, it's seems that all that groove is gone as soon as i move to the corner or something, anyway what do you think, should i carry on?
https://soundcloud.com/solomana/punch/s-d98YE


I think it is normal for it to sound muddy in a corner if the room is untreated, but my thoughts on the track itself, It sounds good, but I think the panning is too noticeable (not sure if it's what you wanted or not) also those rides could be given a little more bite.

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juodas wrote:
Hello guys, so started to make this beat, and i'm looking for some advice. What I'm thinking that, it's sounds good on headphones, but it's sounds muddy on a speakers on a different places in a room, it's seems that all that groove is gone as soon as i move to the corner or something, anyway what do you think, should i carry on?
https://soundcloud.com/solomana/punch/s-d98YE


I think it is normal for it to sound muddy in a corner if the room is untreated, but my thoughts on the track itself, It sounds good, but I think the panning is too noticeable (not sure if it's what you wanted or not) also those rides could be given a little more bite.

You mean on a vocal, or in texture (about panning), more bite, so punchiness or reverb with a little bit of attack, don't get a slang u know, bro :roll:

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suppressor wrote:
Oh man i have been trying to come up with something decent for so long.

So much tweaking... Trying to fix tracks to make them better.. What a fuck around.

Have listen to this, its all acid baby. I need to know if i'm on the right track with my sounds and i need to know if my mix is alright.

https://soundcloud.com/suppressormusic/inhale-the-microparticles-1/s-PDjz9


Sounds quality to me.

For me the kick could do with a little more weight, but it's ok as it is.

I second what hades said about the accent and the break.

Good work.

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You mean on a vocal, or in texture (about panning), more bite, so punchiness or reverb with a little bit of attack, don't get a slang u know, bro :roll:


Well I tried listening back to tell but it appears to have been deleted, I can't recall exactly a part from some elements feeling like they're too much on the right/left.
By more bite I meant that they should have more impact, in this particular case, more high end would definitely help.

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You mean on a vocal, or in texture (about panning), more bite, so punchiness or reverb with a little bit of attack, don't get a slang u know, bro :roll:


Well I tried listening back to tell but it appears to have been deleted, I can't recall exactly a part from some elements feeling like they're too much on the right/left.
By more bite I meant that they should have more impact, in this particular case, more high end would definitely help.

I will reupload a longer version of the track later, at work atm

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What would be great would be a kick like this



that simple, boring, repetitive shit got 128k plays ?
Jezus... :shock:
mr Perc must be having a serious smile on his face.


Yeah, that track is fucking boring. But my guess is that it works in a club in-between more full tracks? I dunno!

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jordanneke wrote:
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What would be great would be a kick like this



that simple, boring, repetitive shit got 128k plays ?
Jezus... :shock:
mr Perc must be having a serious smile on his face.


Yeah, that track is fucking boring. But my guess is that it works in a club in-between more full tracks? I dunno!


Hell yeah, I heard it played once at the club the crowd went batshit crazy, very effective club tool

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Hi just wondering whether this has legs.
Feel like it misses something but don't know if i need to add or simply remodel whats already there.




I like it.

The major thing is that the quality of the mix needs working on. It's not too bad, but the modular beeps need tightening up by more careful eq. It's really noticable when the distortion hits, they really bleed too much into the lower frequencies. This muddies things far too much. I'd shave more off the bottom off the beeps until they are sharper and sit in their own space.

The kick could also do with more of a snap.

In fact the mix sounds a bit too 'flat' it's not very dynamic. It sounds a bit squashed too, is that possible?

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buffered wrote:
Hi just wondering whether this has legs.
Feel like it misses something but don't know if i need to add or simply remodel whats already there.



Damn man, definitely my kind of sound, I think Arkos would appreciate it as well

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https://soundcloud.com/solomana/simonas-punch/s-5AVM4 re-upload 4, any ideas where's i should work on, i'm thinking that i did to much of compression, however feedback is really welcome guys, i need that!

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Thanks everyone who took the time to listen to my track.

Once I've finished it, I'll stick it in the members section

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