Orquesm - ZubJekt (Brand new unreleased deep techno track)

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Orquesm - ZubJekt (Brand new unreleased deep techno track)

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Orquesm - ZubJekt (Brand new unreleased deep techno track)



Would love to hear your opinion.....

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I know you're tecnically within the rules here, so I'm not going to remove this. But I would suggest that if you want feedback on your music you should have posted more than 19 times in the 4 years you've been a member. 8 of those posts were you posting your own tracks.

You get out what you put in.

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You are absolutly right. I did post more and did reviews using another account but that is poor excuse. Posting music is all about getting some honest comments on the stuff you just did, so not taking the time to listen to other peoples stuff and commenting on it is bad mannors. Thx pointing that out to me mate, sometimes it is hard to escape my own bubble....

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For me the track sounds too static, not enough variation to keep me entertained.

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Orquesm wrote:Thx pointing that out to me mate, sometimes it is hard to escape my own bubble....
I wasn't expecting that response. Fair play.

But please... join in.

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Post by seventh serpent »

the sound in my opinion its not that bad...
maybe you have to push it a little more... and give space with some reverb on the instruments
the arrangement its a little bit too basic imo... in my opinion you can improve it with more breaks, automation and effects...
btw the groove its nice when you add more sounds


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