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Demo 2

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Uploaded demo's are numbered for the forum but projects are in no particular order, some are months/years older than others that have already been uploaded.

https://soundcloud.com/nealburton/demo-1/s-3wOrK

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Re: Demo 2

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Hello man, very nice track overall.

That pad needs more movement, more modulation, everywhere. take some LFO's and make it move !
Duplicate it. EQ, comp, chorus, flanger, bring it down, bring it to life !

Cheers bro.
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Re: Demo 2

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sergiobR1 wrote:Hello man, very nice track overall.

That pad needs more movement, more modulation, everywhere. take some LFO's and make it move !
Duplicate it. EQ, comp, chorus, flanger, bring it down, bring it to life !

Cheers bro.
Thanks man, i guess i can see what you're saying, it's just finding that balance where it doesn't sound too much. I'll try some stuff and see what happens.

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Nice track! I'm liking it! I'd just echo what sergio said about injecting some movement with LFO's or automation of FX etc. Otherwise sounds quite clean and well balanced. Could easily imagine hearing or seeing this on that HATE playlist "New techno updated daily" that most people know of, good work!

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Nice one, I like that solid groove you've got going here.

Agreed about the pad, maybe a duplicate that sits a little lower (frequency and volume wise) could do it, and then just mess with some fx.

You might want to dial back the panning and/or delay just a touch on some percussive sounds, it sounds a bit distracting to me at times.
how far do you want to go

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Re: Demo 2

Post by Neal »

Thanks for all the feedback. Taken in your feedback and will apply it. Thanks for listening.


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