Untitled - Jordanneke
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Untitled - Jordanneke
So,
I took on the advice given on my last track, and came up with this.
All comments welcome, good, bad or 'meh'
I took on the advice given on my last track, and came up with this.
All comments welcome, good, bad or 'meh'
Re: Untitled - Jordanneke
A bit of a Shed vibe to it, to the point of sounding a bit too much like someone trying to make a carbon copy of the Wax series.
Very nice though, if not the most original of tracks. Maybe add a little twist to it. Nothing major, just something like an unexpected chord or something might do the trick.
Very nice though, if not the most original of tracks. Maybe add a little twist to it. Nothing major, just something like an unexpected chord or something might do the trick.
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Re: Untitled - Jordanneke
nice track
i would cut down the intro a bit
but thats just me
these days i like to just get to the point.....
i would cut down the intro a bit
but thats just me
these days i like to just get to the point.....
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Re: Untitled - Jordanneke
this is my kind of thing, raw, deep and fucking hypnotic, cool stuff!
WTF?!
Re: Untitled - Jordanneke
1:02 till 1:33 is nice man, after that it becomes a bit too dreamy for me. I'd tuck some raw crunchy mid/high-mid elements in there Good job on the mix though
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I'll take that as a compliment. Shed is the fucking business as far as I'm concerned. Even though I didn't set out to copy him, I guess I've been listening to a lot of his 'Head High' stuff.Barfunkel wrote:A bit of a Shed vibe to it, to the point of sounding a bit too much like someone trying to make a carbon copy of the Wax series.
Very nice though, if not the most original of tracks. Maybe add a little twist to it. Nothing major, just something like an unexpected chord or something might do the trick.
I most certainly didn't try to recreate the wax series, because I can't.
I know it's not the most 'wow' track you've heard, but to be honest, recently I listened to a lot of stuff, and the tracks (including on here) have been so good, that I almost gave everything up. Good in the sense of production techniques and sound design, shit that I wouldn't even manage to think of doing. So I decided to do things that are novel for me, and keep things simple. Hence it's not that innovative, but it is for me.
Glad you like it though
@TvSky and Danuzila, cheers, and sensive - at least you liked the mix!
Re: Untitled - Jordanneke
i did like it
but id cut the 1st min come in at the stab
but id cut the 1st min come in at the stab
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Re: Untitled - Jordanneke
Like it. Simple but effective.
I would prefer a bit more brightness in the top end. Either some extra elements or just more high freqs in the hats. It's an aesthetic choice, but that's what I would do.
I would prefer a bit more brightness in the top end. Either some extra elements or just more high freqs in the hats. It's an aesthetic choice, but that's what I would do.
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I would no way cut the start. It is awesome. Love all the pads (shock, me liking pads?!) <3 Love the kick.
I can hear bits of Shed in there but not in a way that you have straight out copied or anything, you can’t help but be inspired but what you are listening to and I often make tracks akin to whatever I am feeling, artist wise on a a level where I don’t mean to.
Like the pace and feel, stabs, all of it.
The pad that comes in at 3:50 is awesome. Really like everything about it.
Nicely.
I can hear bits of Shed in there but not in a way that you have straight out copied or anything, you can’t help but be inspired but what you are listening to and I often make tracks akin to whatever I am feeling, artist wise on a a level where I don’t mean to.
Like the pace and feel, stabs, all of it.
The pad that comes in at 3:50 is awesome. Really like everything about it.
Nicely.
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That sounds good to me, I quite like how it manages to be pretty chillin, but also a bit of a pounder at the same time. Its not a style that I'm particularly into, but it kept my interest, and the production is quality - thumbs up.
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That, it totally my jam. I would love to be able to do thatRevaron wrote:That sounds good to me, I quite like how it manages to be pretty chillin, but also a bit of a pounder at the same time.
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Thanks all for the time to listen and to comment. Happy that you lot are positive about it.
@Stacie, the strings are from the korg M1 plugin. I'm a sucker for those old-school sounds
Yeah the highs could be higher, I'll look into what I can do with the rides.
Thanks again
@Stacie, the strings are from the korg M1 plugin. I'm a sucker for those old-school sounds
Yeah the highs could be higher, I'll look into what I can do with the rides.
Thanks again
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Re: Untitled - Jordanneke
I like how the high-hats fade in the middle and then come back