Orphan/Lauren - Spet.

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Orphan/Lauren - Spet.

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Re: Orphan/Lauren - Spet.

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There are some cool sounds in there and I like the change from the broken beat to the 4x4, although the transition is a bit abrupt around 2:05.

What was the reasoning behind mixing it in mono?
The mix doesn't sound right to me. I think you could greatly improve the mix by opening it up and panning some elements.
There are too many elements that are fighting for the same space right now. The drone, for instance, almost gets buried underneath everything else.

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nice interesting track, I agree with Evert though....a tune as experimental as this needs some width just to add a little something. cool tune though.
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there are a lot of cool ideas in here!
i like the song and i think it could work really well with the arrangement of the broken/straight section
but
there are alot of issues in the mix
many elements in the lowmids, everything sounds very squashed, no dynamics in the sounds.
The lowend is buried by the harsh drony sounds, which are also too loud imo.
the kick is not really kicking
the elemnts could be much more seperate, you could try to eq it, but i think also the tuning of some elements sound off, and creates overlapping frequencys?
if you tune everything to the same key it can get much easier to mix afterwards
Maybe take a step back from this one and come back to it later, or call it a day and make something new.
hope you can make something out of this

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thanks for the feedback guys.


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