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acesd619
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Death Is The Only Way

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Something I did today. No this isn't dark techno.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QaeJvrKc1qE

youtu.be/QaeJvrKc1qE

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juodas
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Well, I think mix is very busy and it needs clearing, and quite a lot, is way to busy for me , just way to much sounds for me...
Try to choose sounds you like and cut the other ones.
Can't tell a lot, just don't feel a groove just way to much happening everywhere.

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juodas wrote:
Sat Dec 29, 2018 12:53 pm
Well, I think mix is very busy and it needs clearing, and quite a lot, is way to busy for me , just way to much sounds for me...
Try to choose sounds you like and cut the other ones.
Can't tell a lot, just don't feel a groove just way to much happening everywhere.
Thanks that is some good feedback. I tend to just cram things in and call it electronica disregarding groove of course. I told myself I should stop doing these spewy one day sessions but it is a lot of fun. I would make the track more sparse too.

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acesd619 wrote:
Sun Dec 30, 2018 6:49 am
juodas wrote:
Sat Dec 29, 2018 12:53 pm
Well, I think mix is very busy and it needs clearing, and quite a lot, is way to busy for me , just way to much sounds for me...
Try to choose sounds you like and cut the other ones.
Can't tell a lot, just don't feel a groove just way to much happening everywhere.
Thanks that is some good feedback. I tend to just cram things in and call it electronica disregarding groove of course. I told myself I should stop doing these spewy one day sessions but it is a lot of fun. I would make the track more sparse too.
I had and still have same problem, i just overload mix with sounds and always feel that somethibg is missing, however as soon as you starting to cleaning it up, it sounds better

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P0607r0n
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I like the kick, but true the mix is quite busy, and later on the track that kick gets buried a bit too much. Solution could be some equing( dip to the low mids of that pad ie.). I like the track, theres plenty of nice going on.

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Video seems to be unavailable :(


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