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Hi guys i just wanted to show you a few tracks i've been worked on during the last couple of weeks, hope you'll like them. If not i'm open to all critics!

I'm relatively new to the forum and i learned a lot by reading it. so this litle "release": WOLF 424 is some kind of techno oriented style (if you can define it beter go for it ><), it's about interstelar space travel.

Here is the link of the playlist
https://soundcloud.com/ourfutureisperfe ... re-perfect

Have a great journey

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anyone?

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You only have 10 posts, 8 when you made this thread *. Like many things in life, the more you put in, the more you'll get out. So don't be downhearted if you don't get many replies this time. Post around more and you'll get more listens. I've got 2 kids competing for my attention right now, but I may feed back later...




* Next time can you read this forums sticky, please.

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Well, I don't think you require any technical feedback (well, at least not from me!). Sounds like you're not new to this at all.

Mixes sound great to me, I can't comment on that.


A bit too 'dreamy' for me, but that's a preference thing. Great sounding stuff.

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The music itself sounds like this type of music should sound. I get the vibes to labels like Cocoon and similar.

The technical side needs work however, the tracks are very dull. Now I get the idea of "warmth" in this type of music but the mid really needs to poke through in the tracks. More work in the mid and the rest will solve itself naturally.
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jordanneke wrote:Well, I don't think you require any technical feedback (well, at least not from me!). Sounds like you're not new to this at all.

Mixes sound great to me, I can't comment on that.


A bit too 'dreamy' for me, but that's a preference thing. Great sounding stuff.
Thanks for your feedback. Glad to heard that my mixing skills is not too bad :)
Mattias wrote:The music itself sounds like this type of music should sound. I get the vibes to labels like Cocoon and similar.

The technical side needs work however, the tracks are very dull. Now I get the idea of "warmth" in this type of music but the mid really needs to poke through in the tracks. More work in the mid and the rest will solve itself naturally.


Hi mattias what do you mean by your last sentence? (sorry i'm french i have some issues with english sometimes).
Do you mean that the mid isn't loud enouth or it's a comment about the dynamic/compression/EQ of the tracks?

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Nice track, too "slow" for me, I dont hear anything really out of his place, but it sound too "digital". Maybe what Mattias suggested will make the track less digital.

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FuturePerfect wrote:
Hi mattias what do you mean by your last sentence? (sorry i'm french i have some issues with english sometimes).
Do you mean that the mid isn't loud enouth or it's a comment about the dynamic/compression/EQ of the tracks?
Yes you need to have more mid on some of the individual sounds. Don't try to remedy the lack of mid with any master EQ
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I really like the first track around 3 minutes. But I agree that the melodic / synth content needs to a bit more present. Also I'd maybe easy up a bit on the reverb / background hiss.

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ok i understand what you mean thanks for the feedback :)


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