Obtuso - Untitled 07

[daunzila]

Ok, i didnt manage time to work on the last one so i turned on the machines and had some fun

https://soundcloud.com/obtuso_music/untitled-07

[SquareTheCircle]

ok - first things first. I am not into this 'untitled' business.

As for the tune. Its no bad. The arrangement seems interesting enough. You have a tune fully arranged (which isn't a bad place to be).

Now you need to process all the sounds - row by row. Basically, you need to find a way to blend it all together.

[Mattias]

The track itself is totally ok.

I second what SquareThecircle is on about, the mix-down is lacking.

[daunzila]

Hmmm so you say, is more about doing a better mix, not that the sounds itself didnt fit?

Im really struggling with the idea of changing my mixer to a new one with individual outs, to record my tracks as multitrack to be able to work those things after, but at the same time, i never have been so productive, i use to sped months to "finish" a track, always working on details... hard call here

Anyway, thanks a lot for your time to hear this, i will analize the arrangement on this one to see what i can learn from it
Oh and there is any element that you think is really out of the place in the mix that you can point for me?

[daunzila]

oh and about the untitled thing...
idk what to say, is just that im not into naming a track just for the sake of it, those untitled tracks are results of jams, not really made with a concept in mind, so...

but i know it sound dull hehe