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delve
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Charred

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A new banging techno tune with some deep flavor additives.
Oink Oink

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willemb
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Wicked track, i would prefer a bit more dynamics, but other than that really nice.

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Cool track really like the chords that come in would agree with willem on the dynamics it is a bit rounded but nice work man!

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Re: Charred

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Nice work,one area that stands out to me is the start of the track.The intro runs for up to 1 minute and then the bass type sound is introduced, which then runs up into the almost the two minute mark; .I would consider shortening both sections, up until the one minute mark and also from minute 1 up until 1.57
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