Techno WIP close to done- looking for feedback

[xonetacular]

It's kind of intimidating posting my music here since there are so many great producers. I'm finally starting to be happy with where my production is going... I have a WIP that I feel is close to being done that I would like some feedback on- anything that could make it better or general feedback/opinions.

not sure if soundcloud will let me embed private tracks




also tried a broken beat variation- everything else is mostly the same- not sure which I like more.

[Ttinga]

nice stuff, I like the broken beat variation the best

[Contort]

I like the broken beat version best too.

I think a couple of extra elements in the track would make it more complete and keep interest. It's nice but slightly bland/generic for me with the current structure. A break could work well too (not too short) maybe in the 3:10 region.

[LuigiTozzii]

broken beat version is the one for me also!

[Planar]

Sounds good through my laptop speakers. I'm going to go against the crowd here, I prefer the 4 to the floor, the broken beat version needs more drum variations for me.

[xonetacular]

thanks for the feedback and comments

I played around with it a bit and tried to make it a bit more interesting- messed with the structure a bit and added some more automation/a little more fx




i'll finalize the broken beat version too though might mess with the structure/drums a bit to make it a little more interesting

[saminedia]

Sounds great

[Program]

Hey man, sounds great. Personally i like the one with the straight beat more, the 2 note "stabs" work better with everything that way imo.

[kundelfullkorn]

both are great

realy dont need anything

but if you want my thoughts:
i would have liked a cool cowbell or similar
and maybe an formula1 type of sound wrrrouummm

but its not realy nesacery.. Cool tracks

[comunion]

and maybe an formula1 type of sound wrrrouummm

WTF??