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therottencircle
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Coursing

Post by therottencircle »

cheers guys.

just want to share with you a new Track i made.

nothing more to say :D

nice Sunday to you


dubdub
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The kick is a bit lacking in the lower mids, there's no thwack, maybe try layering. Those background drones are a bit much, they clog up the mix in the later parts.

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over9000
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agree about the drones, they are overtaking everything, kick doesent come through anymore..
theyre also too loud

Den Bosch
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Post by Den Bosch »

I can see what you're going for and enjoy some of the droning, but the drone volume gets out of control around 2:60. That Porc at 0:38 sounds a bit off, like it's too dry or just doesn't fit the rest of the track in general. The kick is a lot of bark but not enough bite for my taste (talking about the low end).

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timc3
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Post by timc3 »

Yeah the drones are getting really busy and loud as others have said. I think they might need some more eq to perhaps tame some of the frequencies that are loudest.

I was finding that everything was very mono?

But I love the dark atmosphere and where this is going and really liked it when the drums came back in at 3:27.


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