Belvedere Prophecy

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Monreal
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Belvedere Prophecy

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dubdub
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Re: Belvedere Prophecy

Post by dubdub »

I like the elements you have but the track could use some more development. The main synth/pad thing is quite murky so I think you need some more contrasting elements to make the track less wash-y.

Dethrek
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Re: Belvedere Prophecy

Post by Dethrek »

Nice mood, but I think the track is too "static", like the middle section could use some really slight variations to keep it going, and i believe the mix needs to be a bit sharper.
also I agree with dubdub, it needs some more contrast.

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Re: Belvedere Prophecy

Post by Kraht »

The base I like! It has a Bryan Chapman vibe https://soundcloud.com/bryanchapman/sets/affin.

Maybe you can tingle the listener with a simple off-beat hat after 32 bars and some sequence hits. on the mid section; keeps it more interesting.

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Re: Belvedere Prophecy

Post by Lost to the Void »

It does something else to happen for sure, by the time the second break came I was more than ready for some kind of change.

It`s nice, it`s the nice basis for what sounds to me like an unfinished tune awaiting the final elements.

Very dull mix, needs a redistribution of sound to give it more brightness, and a reduction in all the muddyness in the low mids
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