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 Post subject: Re: >>>> Post A Clip Of What You Are Working On <<<<<
PostPosted: Tue Jun 06, 2017 11:22 pm 
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I'm getting tired of working on this track, guess this will the last delivery , got rid of the claps finally, added some little noises here and there and some vocals from dexter, tell me what you think of it


p.s : the word for jacking of in french is se masturber or se branler


nice track. Like the old-school vibe

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Amon Derrich wrote:
I'm getting tired of working on this track, guess this will the last delivery , got rid of the claps finally, added some little noises here and there and some vocals from dexter, tell me what you think of it


p.s : the word for jacking of in french is se masturber or se branler


Oh yeah? Maybe ill change the track name to se branler.

Your track has an interesting arrangement, i probably would have filtered out that closed hat instead of just cutting it off.

The shaker volume could definitely be mixed a little louder.

I also feel that you loose a little bit of energy in the breaks? Maybe you could keep some sort of percussion element to keep it pushing forward?

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I know this isn't strictly a clip but I've been working on this for too long.

Is it worth trying to refine or is it bin-time?



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 Post subject: Re: >>>> Post A Clip Of What You Are Working On <<<<<
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Amon Derrich wrote:
I'm getting tired of working on this track, guess this will the last delivery , got rid of the claps finally, added some little noises here and there and some vocals from dexter, tell me what you think of it


p.s : the word for jacking of in french is se masturber or se branler


Nice one, I dig it. I feel like that thin pad sound could use a bit of LPF and reverb to open up the space a bit, but that's just how I'd do it.


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 Post subject: Re: >>>> Post A Clip Of What You Are Working On <<<<<
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After the big buildup of my EP release, i have found myself struggling to come up with a lot of new content which is annoying.
But i have managed to push get this together, i was wondering what you guys thought.

I was thinking of adding some vocals, maybe spoken female words in there somewhere?

https://soundcloud.com/suppressormusic/3-faces/s-NiQYN


Sounds good dude. Kind of has a Kangding Ray vibe to it. I wouldn't add vocals if I were you, doesn't really seem necessary.

I do often find I get creative lulls after the release of something. You get used to hearing and focusing on something which is polished/mastered and essentially set in stone--going back to the DAW and working with the wet paint again feels weird for a period. Just press through it and try not to worry about it.


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 Post subject: Re: >>>> Post A Clip Of What You Are Working On <<<<<
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I've been sitting on some unfinished ideas for a while whilst working on getting the fuck out of grad school, and have gradually lost objectivity. Suppose I'll throw it out there and see what the hive mind thinks:

https://soundcloud.com/tdel/sets/feb/s-Q0zqA


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jordanneke wrote:
I know this isn't strictly a clip but I've been working on this for too long.

Is it worth trying to refine or is it bin-time?


definitly nice atmosphere. i think you should be more confident about your music, i always see you doubting your work. but you dont need to, beacause its really good imo. This track could have a bit more tension in it, maybe more percussion also. sound design and atmosphere are great.

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td3l wrote:
I've been sitting on some unfinished ideas for a while whilst working on getting the fuck out of grad school, and have gradually lost objectivity. Suppose I'll throw it out there and see what the hive mind thinks:

https://soundcloud.com/tdel/sets/feb/s-Q0zqA


just listened to the first track. i like the sound design, especially that nice warm sawish sound. i dont know where you want to go with that track, but i think as a more ambienty piece it would work quite well already.

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jordanneke wrote:
I know this isn't strictly a clip but I've been working on this for too long.

Is it worth trying to refine or is it bin-time?




Love the intro, really nice sounds.. Nice trick with fading the kick :)
Maybe you want to put one more leadish kind of sound to keep it driving it after 3 min?
Anyway, nice one!


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 Post subject: Re: >>>> Post A Clip Of What You Are Working On <<<<<
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Amon Derrich wrote:
I'm getting tired of working on this track, guess this will the last delivery , got rid of the claps finally, added some little noises here and there and some vocals from dexter, tell me what you think of it


p.s : the word for jacking of in french is se masturber or se branler



Dont know what else to say that isnt already told.. I like it, nice job


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suppressor wrote:
After the big buildup of my EP release, i have found myself struggling to come up with a lot of new content which is annoying.
But i have managed to push get this together, i was wondering what you guys thought.

I was thinking of adding some vocals, maybe spoken female words in there somewhere?

https://soundcloud.com/suppressormusic/3-faces/s-NiQYN


Love this one, great sound design and arrangement.. Also agree with somebody else(not sure who), i wouldnt add any vocals.. Its working really well like this.
Nice job!!


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 Post subject: Re: >>>> Post A Clip Of What You Are Working On <<<<<
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Been a little bit busy last few weeks so didnt have any time to leave the feedback.. I was creatively blocked also so i took a small break.
Anyway, will get back to feedbacking more tracks later today or tommorow.
Cheers all


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 Post subject: Re: >>>> Post A Clip Of What You Are Working On <<<<<
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jordanneke wrote:
I know this isn't strictly a clip but I've been working on this for too long.

Is it worth trying to refine or is it bin-time?




Sounds really good as usual, but I don't like the arrangement I was expecting a highpass on everything at 2:00 than a drop with hihats on, but the intro is definitely good, I like that "coming from underground" effect

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jordanneke wrote:
I know this isn't strictly a clip but I've been working on this for too long.

Is it worth trying to refine or is it bin-time?





Really digging the intro, it caught my attention straight away, i love those voices in the background.
Keep working on this track for sure, i think this would fit perfectly either at the beginning of a set or in the middle to break up the chaos.
I agree, maybe you could introduce one more percussive element to bounce off?

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over9000 wrote:
td3l wrote:
I've been sitting on some unfinished ideas for a while whilst working on getting the fuck out of grad school, and have gradually lost objectivity. Suppose I'll throw it out there and see what the hive mind thinks:

https://soundcloud.com/tdel/sets/feb/s-Q0zqA


just listened to the first track. i like the sound design, especially that nice warm sawish sound. i dont know where you want to go with that track, but i think as a more ambienty piece it would work quite well already.


Yeah it's meant to be a more ambient-ish piece. Probably will flesh it out some more at some point when I have the time...


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Might as well share this too since I've just been sitting on it, and find it enjoyable enough:

https://soundcloud.com/tdel/bdx56/s-QzqCL


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jordanneke wrote:
I know this isn't strictly a clip but I've been working on this for too long.

Is it worth trying to refine or is it bin-time?




Sounds good to me as-is. I think you could flesh out the arrangement some after the 3-4 minute mark, but otherwise I'd just leave it as-is for the most part.


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Thanks all for the feedback. When it's done i'll post it up.

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 Post subject: Re: >>>> Post A Clip Of What You Are Working On <<<<<
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td3l wrote:
Might as well share this too since I've just been sitting on it, and find it enjoyable enough:

https://soundcloud.com/tdel/bdx56/s-QzqCL


This is good.

You should post it in the member's section for full feedback.

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https://soundcloud.com/purcer/prvw/s-aJjge

Working on this one atm. Have a listen! :)


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